BookRix

Please update.

love the book cant wait untill you update it

awsome more,more more i would justdo some editing but otherwise i love it

awsome more,more more i would justdo some editing but otherwise i love it

This is a good start. You will need to edit some areas. The title is one area. The new paragraphs need to have capitals for the first letter. These are easy to do. You can find the errors on a read through. You have a good story and I am interested in reading the rest of the book./joeparente

dude!! updates???!!!!

It is good I love but write more so I can find out what happens and update me