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i like this books

i like this books

A very nice book with a goos=d story and a true message. It read well and I think that teens will love this as they can idetify witht he characters, I read everything that was online and want to see more of your work. Keep it up.

I sent a grading also.

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If you have time try to read one or teo of my offerings and let me knoe your grading and comments as that is how e all learn here at Bookrix. I appreciate your time and am very thankful for anyone to take time in their day to read something iave written. I will look at other things you have written as i think there is a market for your book and a vast maount of readers would enjoy est of luck. TH jw

thank you so much! im so glad you liked it and thank you for voting! i cant wait to upload the rest!

I like Angels and Death. I have saved it and voted for you!
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thank you very much for your comment and i very much appreciate your help, thats the kind of help im always looking for and am so glad for your pointers thanks again!

You have a great idea for a story. It's very imaginative and different from others.
I would recommend that the use of words making noises be changed. These words are ring ring ring, beep beep beep etc. If you use these sparingly it would help with the uniqueness of your story. I make these comments as a tool to help make your story better. You have a good start and I will vote for your imagination./joeparente
Please read:
http://www.bookrix.com/_mybook-joeparente_1289855934.2114710808

hello thankyou for your comment and i will deffinately add more, as i have finally completed the story! thanks again and i hope you read it once ive posted it! :)

i love it!!!!! please add more!!!!! :)