Wow, this was different! If only women could have their virginity restored after rape...but then again, why would they want to go through the pain all over again? A thought provoking question.
As far as your word structure and use is concerned, it would appear English is a second language and some words were a little inappropriate or too flowery. Nevertheless, congratulations on writing in another language and doing it so well.
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I am glad you enjoyed it. What did you like most about it? :)
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R.N.,
You have written a very interesting and thought provoking story about tragedy and choice. I enjoyed your story.
Great writing!
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As read from the viewpoint of an entirely different culture, with mores nearly 180 degrees away from the culture in your nice little story, I found the ending fascinating.
You did a good job of writing a rather intense story. Yes, I enjoyed it!
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