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Please update this book I want to know what happens please.
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It has promise. A few tense issues you might want to look at. Consider putting dialogue exchanges in their own paragraphs. Overall, very well done, though. Keep up the good work...and think about getting an outside set of eyes to read and offer editing suggestions.
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Ok Thank you so much!! I'm not really good at writing, but creating stories is my favorite thing to do.
Hello everyone this is the author of " My Candy Love" I have rewritten and edited the book and made some changes . Now the book is titled "Thorny Heart" I have included more content so please keep updated since I will be completing the book! Best wishes! -Rizza
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