The First Shadow Trail

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The First Shadow Trail

This book is a work in progress. i seem to catch writers block at the worse of times. This will be the first installation in a series of book which follows a young man, fed up with the world, trying to change the future for many races. Not just humans. He has endured much pain in his growth and now, furthing himself as a man and shadow being(though he does not know yet) he begins the true hardships of his life.



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Little Falls, NY

I agree the invasion was a crime. I and others patiently await criminal
proceedings for inciting this race-based attack. It was performed because of
similar skin color and religious imagery, as if Iraqis were somehow
responsible for Saudi actions on 9/11. The American officials responsible for
these killings should be imprisoned, with Bush, Cheney and unquestionably
Hillary Clinton and Don Rumsfeld among them.... mehr anzeigen

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I like your. Reativity so far. I would say that the beginning of the book where you explained the book felt a little rushed, and kind of confusing to understand fully the world around him aand where he came from. I didmt realize that he was in a modern city until he mention a car passing. He was in the middle ages for all I knew.

It seems to me like you were going for the mysterious setting. But the begoning felt a little too... mehr anzeigen

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Please comment with insights, ideas and anything that can help me further this tale. It is the first book also so remember that the story has no end here. There's always something.

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