BookRix

Little Falls, NY

I agree the invasion was a crime. I and others patiently await criminal
proceedings for inciting this race-based attack. It was performed because of
similar skin color and religious imagery, as if Iraqis were somehow
responsible for Saudi actions on 9/11. The American officials responsible for
these killings should be imprisoned, with Bush, Cheney and unquestionably
Hillary Clinton and Don Rumsfeld among them. Hillary knew. I knew. She is a
lot smarter and better connected. Let them all rot. Law and decency demand
their incarceration and eventually, their deaths in custody. The delays
confuse me and I suppose white privilege is the primary reason why these
architects of premeditated slaughter walk free.

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I like your. Reativity so far. I would say that the beginning of the book where you explained the book felt a little rushed, and kind of confusing to understand fully the world around him aand where he came from. I didmt realize that he was in a modern city until he mention a car passing. He was in the middle ages for all I knew.

It seems to me like you were going for the mysterious setting. But the begoning felt a little too vague. But thats just my two cents.

Other than that, I like the concept, and you seem to be doing a good job so far with progressing the story.

Please comment with insights, ideas and anything that can help me further this tale. It is the first book also so remember that the story has no end here. There's always something.