BookRix

I very much like this book. Not having the time right now to read the book from beginning to the end, I read sometimes here, sometimes there. But no matter where I open the book, every page is immediately interesting and I want to continue to read. So I wish you all the best and many readers. Make more paragraphs to make reading easier for the eyes.

This story is nicely written. You have a number of major formatting issues, but those are easily repaired. The story itself is fascinating, and I love your imagination! A quick suggestion - when writing in the first person, you can get away with large portions of what they call "telling" (which only became a problem in recent years, for some reason), but after several paragraphs you could introduce a bit of dialogue to break it up. You do "show" things well, by the way, so I don't see a problem with that at all.

The biggest formatting problem here is the lack of paragraph indents. I'm sure you have this in a Word manuscript, or some similar format. If you uploaded it, your original formatting may not have been picked up by the site's filters. You would be better served to use the other option, and copy/paste each chapter in so the indents are added automatically.

I'm glad to see you also have this available for purchase - aside from the few problems mentioned that need a little editing, it seems like a book lots of people wouldn't mind paying for, and as a good writer, you deserve that kind of recognition.

All the best to you, and thank you so much for posting your wonderful story here for us to read free. ')

Thanks... it can be purchased now.. if you wish.. do let me know...

This is a great book! You're an amazing writer! :)

I am up to page 577, thanks for responding, yeah that french dude is frightening, I don't think he has enough hair to be trust worthy. I like the french guy from Australia much better.

I recommend to check out these books as well:
http://www.galactic-server.com/rune/udxen.html

I have not had the opportunity of hearing about that Australian writer.
I'll follow that link you gave me and check it out.
Peace be with you
Rabbi Desiree

Yes... he is identified in the book. And yes, I actually finally found his book, and read it. That is what definitely decided me to write this book. Later, I also met him. He is still alive and wrecking havoc in people's lives. He has over 50.000 followers now. Just read on, till the end. That is the best way to know what is going on. Then ask me all the queations you wish to ask. I'll see where you are at, now.

Did you ever identify who the french guy was and the book he wrote? I am up to page 335 and if it is revealed in the book I havent read of it yet.

There is a book I enjoy reading written by a french guy from australia - http://www.scribd.com/doc/7051700/Thiaoouba-Prophecy - this book also says it has something to do with jesus and the various "holy" events, what do you think?

This is really good! You are an amazing writer! Congrats!!!!!!

You deserve to be known the world over.
Enjoyed it.