I don't really like how it suddenly veers from Twilight, like "I love you so much that I will died for you even if I don't think there's an afterlife for me," to "Ah, what the heck. Let's betray Bella completely and prove that I was lying the whole time!"
Sorry. This one wasn't that great.
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Very confusing with the messy grammar, but that's ok!
Words of note:
Vampires are like stone not just in body, but in mind. If they experience a truly strong emotion (like love) it is "engraved" in their soul forever. That's why vampires only have one mate. For example:
Victoria: when James died, her grief consumed her, and even though she flirted with Riley, she didn't truly love him because she had mated with James.
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You need to check over this and fix A LOT. It's a good plot but the grammar is absolutely terrible.
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I liked the book but there are a few mistakes in it like leaving out some parts of the word,missing a few words,and putting chat lines where the`re not supossed to be
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hmmm i understand the plot but its just the details that are lacking if you could provide more detail i thing you would have a smash hit
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what about edward trying to kill them?
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