Great start so far. Sweetie seems like an interesting character. As the chapters go by I have no doubt that you will deliver a great story. Keep it up!
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This is a good start to what is turning into an interesting story. A few grammatical errors but a good rough draft. Won't be hard to polish up. I hope you write more of this. :)
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it will be completed soon
The book will be completed soon.