No Getting Out

Sasha's Story Von:
No Getting Out

Ty and Sasha meet on this one chance encounter and find that it was lust at first sight. They quickly fall for one another and their love rollercoaster has more than a few ups and downs. This around the way love is bound to create some confusion, steamy moments and the most difficult test ever but who will survive it? There is No Getting Out.


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Nina burke

Great story, i love how your words draw me in at the first page. Brilliant. Just want to add that I'm a great ebook cover designer. You can give me your picture and suggestion of how you would like it to look and I'll make it happen.

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Porsha Ariel

Aww great thank you and that sounds like a great idea, I will message you.

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iykyk

Heyy!! Just started reading this and its really good! Some feedback:

Try to not keep all of the writing in bunches of paragraphs but separate them whenever you are describing a new piece of information to the readers like when you describe a person (the husband and kidnappers), start a new paragraph.
Or when a new event happens like she noticed the car following her, start a new paragraph, when she hears his voice, start a new... mehr anzeigen

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iykyk

Also, when paragraphing, space it out too. Like with mine, I did paragraphs but they are too close still so here it how it could be:

Heyy!! Just started reading this and its really good! Some feedback:

Try to not keep all of the writing in bunches of paragraphs but separate them... mehr anzeigen

Porsha Ariel

Omg thank you so much for that feed back. I will go in today to do some editing to make it more understanding. I super appreciate your feed back and I will make those changes, thank you so much, my first reader!!!!! It will be completely updated by Sunday.

Porsha Ariel

My book has been updated, I cant wait for more feedback

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