My Travels

A long journey to here Von:
User: pligeti
My Travels
It took a long time to get where I am right now. It was an unexpected and twisty road. Sometimes I wonder how would have happened if I had not done it.

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Gelöschter User

I didn't know Golf was such a psychological sports :). There is one word that i would change.

In four hours you will know most everything.

I would change most to almost, it sounds better in my head.

The second one is so romantic :).

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felixthecat

Three freestanding, complete little 100-word stories...or Drabbles.
First off, I was quite impressed with the "pixel" perfect prose. You are an accomplished writer, and it shows in the narration, grammar, and structure. Each story has great interest as well.
Sneak, sneaked, sneaked. Bravo!

Critique:
Golf is a TERRIBLE sport, lol. Just ask me or Donald Duck :)

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lazarus67

Well done....written by a man who personally escaped presumed eternal bondage.

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