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This is amazing and I love it. (:

yeah.. that's why i was able to wrote it.

wtf are you forreal. Did this really happen.

The premise of the story is good, heart felt. There are issues with the grammar that need to be addressed. I can not in good conscience give it a vote as the minimum page count for this contest is 20 pages.

i would surely do the necessary corrections.

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