BookRix

Nice plot. plz keep writing

PLZ PLZ PLZ UPDATE!!! ITS REALLY GOOD

i love the plot keep writing plzs

This is great! please write more!

The story can be developed further as there is much space for the story to expand. The story flows smoothly like the mountain stream. I appreciate your imagination as this type of story requires more brain cells to act creatively.

I really dislike the fact that there wasnt that much pages to read but it did want me too read more. Your aunt may be a hell of an inspirationer (not a word) to make you write this. Its beautifully written just some grammatical errors. Inform me when updated.
~crystal