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I got the fact that the 'creatures' were humans in the first couple of paragraphs but I couldn't figure out with the narrator was...I thought spider then mouse...didn't think cockroach! Well done! Kept me guessing and wanting more!

I've read the simple and the complex, but I've not read better!! it might be tough to do as good again.it's better to create something worth reminicing over in conversation with others than to be prolific but forgetable.

it's REALLY good and its not 100 pages long my kinda book

Very interesting. You led us readers experience a different view point of "the creature". Very nice. You made my day for sharing this book. Thanks!!!!

I didn't know that it was about cockroaches til the very end. It's really smart how you did that. Definately one of my favourites.

what a smart writer you are!! this is a most ingenious story about a very prolific and distasteful creature. you made me look at a lifeform I wouldn't give a second thought too,but will never be able to disregard again.

very clever

Thanks for the kind words. I'm looking forward to reading your work as well.

Loved the twist at the end, but had a feeling your story was heading in that direction. I like the way you made humans the enemy. I wrote a story with a similiar scenario myself that I may post on BookRix. Good job - got my vote.

As always the Great Nomar Knight brings a tantalizing tale from the POV of the hunted. It's gripping and engaging. One that has me flipping the pages. Keep on the great work, my friend. ;-)And for that I gave you a vote.