The concept of your novel seems very thought out and because your words are so powerful, it seems you are reflecting something that was occurring in your life at the time of creating this work of literature.
The only critiques I am going to give you are:
1. When writing, choose one tense. Throughout your story, you seem to switch between present and past tense very often which doesn't allow what you are trying to convey, to... mehr anzeigen
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Luv it u should update
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thank you so much. Glad you like it :)
Your book is a fresh look at life and I enjoyed reading it very much. I do hope you write more about Stan Duncan.
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Thanks @Davebccanda. I'm glad that you like my book! and soon when I have time the story will continue
I loved it , your an amazing writer ^^
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OH! Thanks alot!!!! I'm really flattered :D
wow your book is incredible! I like it very well! :)
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Thanks! I'm very glad that you liked it. I hope you could tell your friends about it.
Thank you so much for reading my book. I'm glad that a busy admin like you had time to read my book. I'm still learning and practicing!
Haha no it's totally fine, I enjoy giving writers feedback on their work plus I wasn't that busy at the time anyways & that's great, practice pays off!