The diary of an angel

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The diary of an angel
This is the diary of an 15 years old angel and her adventures.

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mysteriousgirl1

well actually this book is finished ...but i have also two other stories ,two books similar to this in my profile, read them if you want and thanks for your heart. I hope you like them too. :D

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stevie.grace

Totally got a Twilight-meets-heaven feel from your Diary. Really liked it. I agree with Felix. With a few spelling fixes I think it will flow a lot better. :) Good luck!

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felixthecat

I'm not quite sure what to say, mysteriousgirl1.
It's absolutely charming! I can say that:)

Perhaps if you did a spell check (advisable:), capitalized, used beginning and ending quotes...all those nasty rules...much of its simple beauty might get lost! Yes, I think it would:)

Such a neat little "diary"! Bravo!

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