Omg i loved this book u need to keep going and adding to it its gotten to me like gluei just cant get away frome it ive read it 4 times now in the last week i love it so much
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It was really interesting. I liked it alot :)
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Lol, Thanks, I'm glad you liked it~!! (^v^)/ ♥♥♥
Very interesting. In the beginning the poetic prose was so thick I got overwhelmed by the adjectives. However the scenic view was colorful and beautiful at the same time. Well done. I enjoyed delving into a fantastic nether world. As time went on the dialog had the perfect grounding effect to draw me in and keep the me interested. The sex scene seemed shortened and could have used a few more words so that the reader could see... mehr anzeigen
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Thanks for the Review~!! :) I'm planning on re-writing the prologue~ hopefully I can open the story a little better~!! I'm just a total adjective person~!! ♥♥♥ I get what you say about Aries... I have a hard time with his character, in 'real life' we'd never get along~!!
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In general this seems much more professional than a lot of books that I have seen on bookrix, I enjoyed what I read so far, so I will favorite it and try and get back to it when I have the time. Nonetheless there are still some recommendations I can make that you can do with as you please:
1. On page 3 this sentence caused me to stop reading for a second and read it again:
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Aw~ Thanks so much~!! :3 ♥♥♥
I'm currently trying to focus on A Witch's Hunt, but be assured I haven't given up on A Dark Grace just yet~!! :)
Thank u message me when u update it plz
Promise~!! :D