BookRix

Hello. I am Icygem1300. I have written a book that revolves around the elements, too.
I plan to write a series of six(I think...).
I like your book a lot, even though I haven't read much:)
I hope to read it all, and would you mind reading my book and commenting on it?
The book is called Elementess.
Thank You, and sincerely
Icygem1300

Is this the end of the book? I hope you write another soon. The ending was very unexpected.

what is the name of the sequel? can the dragons preform magic of their own? I like the book.

Love The Update! I so want to know whats gonna happen next. Please write more soon!

The cover is Winx Club, I hardly watch it on Nickalodian cuz my brother never lets me. And I have ballet at 12:00 :( Maybe you should add more Elements! Here are my ideas:

Spirit
Blood
Wind
Mind
Death
Sun

Allie

PS: I LOVE THIS BOOK!!!! WRITE MORE BOOKS!!!

I loved the update. Please write more soon!

I love it, it is hard to follow at first but the beginning defiantly hooked me. I think you should work on the white space, all the words tend to blur together when I read it. I think that you had a great idea and keep writing. :)

LOVE IT!!! Cant wait for more! You do have some spelling and grammar errors, but other that that totally amazing. write more soon!

can't wait to read the rest it is an awesome book.

Good beginning, but be careful with the proofreading. There are some mistakes. Also let the readers form images, create the pictures as a puzzle, give them clues and let them create the bigger picture in their minds( It's called showing not telling, try to think about the difference). I can't wait to see the rest. :)