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I had no idea you fear heights. I am afraid too. I never knew that I helped you in some way to get over it.

Now the story. It's a good piece. Readers can relate to the story which is good. What's not so good is that it sounds more like an essay than a fictive story. I hope you won't say that I'm mean, but do check text again. You have some spelling errors, you also use the Romanian syntax instead the English one in some places. I'm only telling you this because a good story is even better when it's easy to read.
Keep on writing.

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It was a pretty interesting piece. I don't have that fear myself and it was interesting for me to experience it through your eyes.
Good job

I like the way you explained the emotion of fear, and especially your particular fear. It did however have the feel of a n essay on fear rather than a story about your fear.

That being said, perhaps you were the only one who really got the point.

Good luck in the contest.

I loved it. We do share the same view of why there is fear. To protect us from harm. Well written I understood the point you were getting across. You should get more hearts than mine..