A great piece of flash fiction, Melissa!
Thank you for sharing.
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Before I crack the cover I see confusion. Your lettering on your cover is very hard to read. It needs to stand out so you could add contrasting color (white I'd suggest) behind the letters. Now let me check out the written word.
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Wow! Powerful! The only problem I see with it is you have fulfilled your promise in the title. Where do you go from here?
Thanks, Dave. Well, I'll probably just leave it as a short story. LOL!
Oh, and I fixed the cover. Thanks for letting me know.
very well written.... enjoyed your story. hope you could continue with this story further.
it's a nice start by the way.... :)
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Thanks, Parth. I'm glad you enjoyed it.
As a mom, I was having a hard time with the beginning of this, so the way you ended it...well. Beautifully written as always, touching in exactly the right measure all the things that matter most - faith, hope, love...well done, indeed. Thank you for sharing this!
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Thanks, Judy. I appreciate your thoughts.
Thank you, Chris. I'm so glad you enjoyed my little story.