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It is a lively tale you've created, Mel. It's highly imaginative and a bit fascinating. I'm sure the story will be a favorite when you complete it There are a lot of errors in structure and grammar but they do not seriously detract from the story. Of course you will have to correct them before you can release this story but a serious edit will catch many of the errors and if you can convince a friend to read it over with you... mehr anzeigen
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thank you very much please tell where you found bad grammar it would be very helpful for me. And please enjoy<3<3<3
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