The Puppeteer's City

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The Puppeteer's City

If only people in the world weren't so crude, than maybe Michael wouldn't have to worry about turning the world into a living craphole. I mean of course nobody's perfect, but there are just things you don't have to do. Michael was the most sweetest and curious boy, if his parents weren't murdered maybe he would still be. But now that he isn't the same he used to be, you better watch your back because if your on his kill list it'll take a miracle for you not to die.


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  • Veröffentlichung: 17.07.2016
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Seraph Wedd
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Seraph Wedd

It's a nice story. Writing it in a negative perspective gave it a nice feel to it. If you could just separate paragraphs from each other, It'll be much easier to read. ^_^

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Ayami-chu
Ayami-chu

Thx for letting me know I'll work on that.

Rico Ichijero
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Rico Ichijero

The book was great but there was a few sentences that wasn't making any sense.

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Ayami-chu
Ayami-chu

Hmm which ones and which page or page's?

Rico Ichijero
Rico Ichijero

I wasn't paying attention to the pages but I do know that it was some where in the beginning

Ayami-chu
Ayami-chu

May may I'll look over it thanks for letting me know

Ayami-chu
Ayami-chu

I meant to say Kay Kay

Rico Ichijero
Rico Ichijero

lol OuO OwO *v*
=u= =o= =w=

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