KILLERS CAN LOVE TOO

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User: murderess
KILLERS CAN LOVE TOO
Year 2013, a virus that gives the host the ability to suck life and turn anything into dust has spread the world. The infected were called Reapers and those who had the strongest were the level 999s. If they do not consume life sources, they would die. So the government decided to make them killers. Tanya Everstone, a level 999, is pursued by the maker of the virus who would stop at nothing to get her. But four boys will teach her what love is-the hard way.
Raphael- sweet and too good to be true to her. Is his angelic façade truly real?
Anthony- her childhood friend who knows her dark past suddenly emerges. But is he the real one?
Damien- he proposes to Tanya to be his bride. Should she trust his sudden proposal?
Cam- a sadist who has killer kisses. When will he stop playing with her?
Lies and betrayal surround her. Despite that, she learns painfully that killers can love too.

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murderess

hmm how do i improve it(the proofread)?
Oh and thank you for giving your feedback again :)
It has been in my mind to make a sequel of this.Should I?
The sequel would be something like this: Set in the year at the ending. A new main character: a youthful and good-looking male Reaper lets a criminal escape. His mistake would cost him than he had ever intended. The criminal sets out to kill a girl (the only survivor of his... mehr anzeigen

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Vigilant_One

This story has much more substance than the others that you have written so far. You delved into the thoughts of your characters in more detail and I think it helped. The anti-hero character having to admit his love was a taste of a good literary mechanism. Also good was the use of a character very close her who could hurt "Locket" in a very personal way.

Now the bad; this reeked of High School girl. If it had not been for... mehr anzeigen

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