Tommy's Troubles

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ladygal01
User: CJ Scully
Tommy's Troubles
A young boy is orphaned and must scrabble in New York to earn his bread. He gets involved in crime and finds some friends who help him get back on track.

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CJ Scully
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CJ Scully

Hello. Actually the comment below was by another person who didn't have a profile yet.
I will take your advice. Thank you for the time you took reading it!
Peace, love, and happiness

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Rgabel
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Rgabel

You have a delightful sense of humor I noticed in the comment below! LOL Actually you write quite well. You have a good vocabulary, it's been awhile since I have read the word 'molder'. You do well at moving the scene. I would suggest using 'mum' when the child calls out to their mother. Building the story well, good emotion. Robynn

CJ Scully
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CJ Scully

Hi Ladygal01,

This book sounds exciting, enticing and worth the Nobel Prize. Good luck with this book. Finish it soon so I can read it.
:-)

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