The New Girl

The story of Kandaye Von:
The New Girl
Kandaye is a rich girl but she doesnt enough love from her perents but when she moves to New York her life changes completley becouse of one person Zack Jones

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Kandaye, Zack
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genh888tzu

One suggestion though - you should probably read this over and add some punctuation. Without it, the reader can get confused. It also helps with the flow of your sentences. Keep up the good work!

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neptune.desire

So far so good, just double check your spelling and punctuation. But keep writing hun your headed in the right direction

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maria10452

im maria i wrote this book its not complitley fineshed but i hope u like it comment and tell me what you think if u dont like it ill stop writing and make a new one thanxx and have a great day

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