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Well, one thing I notice right away is that you say her dad is lying on the bed caughing. The word cough, is spelled like cough. Just a minor edit, and more can be made. There are also certain parts that seem random, like the part where you mention that she skipped a grade. Another thing-as a direct quote from the text, it says, "Hey kid, what's your name little boy?" This is being said to the main character, which I thought... mehr anzeigen
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Awhh! Oh my gosh! You're such a help!!! Thank you so much!! Also, they call her a little boy because they're making her feel bad telling her she looks like a boy. Anyway, thanks so much!!
Sure! If you want more feedback, just tell me.
Please! I would really appreciate it!
BTW, you are SUCH a good writer. This book is astounding.
Awhhhhh thank you so much!!!
Hmm...interesting. This needs a lot of work to fill the loop holes but so far so good.
So the lead is in a phase of her life where she just wants a boyfriend and all the guys she's interested in are either taken or mean? Hmm...
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Yeah, basically. So that means they're "Just Friends" but I'm still working on it, so more will come soon :)
Yay
Wow Madison... and you say you CAN'T WRITE?! who do you think your kidding!? YOU CAN WRITE! and GUESS WHAT?! you write well!! like SUPER WELL!!! pleasepleasepleaseplease update?!?!?!?!
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Thank you soooo much! I really appreciate comments like this!! I'll update soon! I update a lot so, I'll let you know when I do :)
YAY! thankyou!!
I am looking forward to reading more of this story, Madison. I hope you continue to develop it over the Easter holidays.
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Thank you :) Just to let you know, it's updated! If you would like to continue reading.
i like this book so far, when is the next time u think you'll be updating??
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thnx! I update when I have free time. Most of the time, I add a couple sentences, on the weekend I add a lot because I have a lot of time.
ok thanks for telling me i can't wait to read more :)
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Updated :)
I like this book so far. The humour at the end, priceless! I think I'll try it sometime. :)
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:) same xD
I'm sorry it's so late, I took a break from BookRix for awhile.
Understandable, now I'll get back to reading your book...
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