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Review - You have an interesting concept here. I can tell you've been studying Greek history. You have described her homecoming well and develop some questions in me, the reader. For instance, how can she leave her earth parents so easily? You described them as very interesting, down to earth people. I wonder why she isn't worried that they might be worried about her disappearance.

Your strength is developing an interesting story, your weakness, sentence structure.
Overall though, you did a good job. Robynn

Thank you chicalima I love your enthusiasm! ^.^

Alright, the only words I can find right now are these: I, love, this, awesome, wonderful, exciting, story. Keep writing!! ^v^

yes definitely should keep writing its very interesting

I love this book omg coutinue

I like it. Just remember to revise and all. The plot is mesmerizing and it pulls me into realization that this might just be real. ^-^ Add more and keep me interested, eh?

i loved this book and since ur righting about goddess could you look at my books The Fire Goddess and The Wind Goddess. Plus, also for me could you look up Hunters and Huntresses that would be wonderful please and thank you. Oh, please comment and favorite

-Angel4ever xoxoxoxoxoxo

This book is awesome!!!! you should finish it so i can become addiced to it! omg excited.....loooooovve it!