Nicely done.
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For one with such a pretty face, you have a very dark side. A very dark side.....And yep, I like it.....
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I don't really know what one has to do with the other, but thanks.
I really like it :)
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Thank you :))
"But today is a new start; Today is point zero" I love that! great poem!
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"Yet everything has an end, even pain" - That is a great line!
I like how coherent this is - easy to follow and easy to feel the emotions searing through each word. Great job!
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Thanks :))
This gave me goosebumbs! Good job!
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Thanks! I'm happy to have spooked you a little :)
This was a very interesting poem. Your use of words was impressive is your command of structure for the most part, my only critical statement would be a couple lines that didn't flow quite as well as the others. Overall though, I enjoyed it :)
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