I have a book 2 and book 3 is coming out soon!
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hmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm
im sorry but I LOVE IT!!!!!
nice new cover
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hmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm
im sorry but I LOVE IT!!!!!
nice new cover
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Hmm, this was an interesting story. Good job.
I do, however, have some critiques:
There are several spelling and punctuation errors strewn throughout the entire book. It might be nice if you went through it yourself and fixed the mistakes.
Also, I like the introduction to the book. It's very unique and has an interestingly dull tone to it. Though I wouldn't recommend anyone to continue and write the rest of the story like the... mehr anzeigen
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well im so sorry, but i have other things to do to like u can do every thing prefect.
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Luv it!!!!!!!!!!!!
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lol its a page long not like it takes long to read...... maybe you put it out to the public on accident ? no idea
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lol its a page long not like it takes long to read...... maybe you put it out to the public on accident ? no idea
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lol its a page long not like it takes long to read...... maybe you put it out to the public on accident ? no idea
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How can u read this book when it was out just for a minute, but i will fix my mistakes.
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