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i like your cover and the story is really interesting so far. i was a bit confused by all the names you used though because i guess you call each character by their first and last name? or you just introduce a new character during dialogue and i was like "what? who's that? where did they come from?"
and you've got some editing problems that need to be fixed up.
other than that - great start!
let me know when you write more!
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