BookRix

Okay, I can't seem to open it, I am blocked to open it, it says:

"Sorry, this book is only available to users over the age of 18 due to the current"

I am 28, and it still isn't allowing me to open it.....

This has got to be made into a movie! I was on edge, wondering who was going to live or die. Perfecto!

...Just excellent. Excellent, excellent, excellent!
I love the dialogue and the fact that it seems soo realistic, like as if I was one of the characters myself.
I like the fact that your character Lec is protective over his sister and how he has her listen to her iPod so she doesn't get scared. I can actually picture Eric Balfour playing him too.
And Kat, gosh. This will give the audience a tension that she is still alive. I really thought that she was a ghost back from the grave. xD But then you surprised me.
If this was made into a movie I'd so go to the thrashers every day to watch it until it was gone, rent it, then buy it. :p And I'd so want to watch if it goes into a sequel. That'd be cool.
Great job. :)

I literally fell in love with this screenplay!
I was reading the dialogue, which I must say is very interesting.
I actually feel like I'm there, experiencing what the characters are experiencing.
Great work, got my vote. :)

Good job, Nessa. You have my vote:)

I did enjoy the dialogue the most. I am not a screenplay critic, by any means, but this was very interesting.

Yeah, there are some typos with the word "cut-too", some should be changed to "cut-to". These are small corrections you can make as you re-read the screenplay. Editing is never easy, so no worries.

Great job! Voted!

This is good, I enjoyed reading it to the end. The content of the story was interesting. In screenplays its hard for me to "feel" the characters but the dialog was realistic and kept my interest.

I can see this extended into a full screenplay, with all the high tension, the audience just KNOWING Kat is alive (sic) and well, lurking inside the asylum...waiting.
Other than the tense issue and a few typos, this story is extremely good! I thoroughly enjoyed reading it. Nice going.