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Hi Linda,
Wow that was epic! Sorry that it has taken me a while to respond.
A well written story for the character perspective, with Tyrone and Tiara feeling solid and with some depth.
The flow of the story may require some work by cutting down on the detail - this can often hinder the reader and story development.
Other than that, very well written!
Ben
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Hi Ben,
I appreciate you reading Reflections...thanks for the observation; I have received some very good advice about the book. I think my next step for Reflections/Little girl's short stories will be a re-write, which will flow better for the next book, a continuation (Revitalized)
Thanks again
Linda
Hello Michael,
I appreciate your heartfelt feedback about reflections…your input is very encouraging as I move forward in all of my creative endeavors. I have a lot of plans for my future writing and as time permits I will continue the journey of developments…Thanks again-)
Linda B
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Hi Marie,
I appreciate your kind thoughts about the characters in my book. Thanks for reading and for your vote...
Linda B
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The gentleness, the tenderness that Tyrone feels for Tiara , the more aware woman who don't deceive herself , with sometimes as much lucidity as vulnerability , knowing how to mask the underlying sensuality behind the prudent indifference...I appreciate many aspects of the narrative structure...You got my vote.
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so so, not good like olfa and afzel shauq
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so so, not good like olfa and afzel shauq
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so so, not good like olfa and afzel shauq
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