BookRix

Hi Leah, good book. I look forward to reading the finished product from beginning to end.

nobody has commented on my book since , come on people i wont finish untill i have more comments

This book is about crime and death. A woman who sadly lost her son due to knife crime. She then went through a lot of pain but she still had the faith and kindness to forgive her sons killers. " I forgive my son's killers , but I will never forgive the crime"

Haha Ty ..
But none of them are the ending ,but great ideas :) ...
You will have to wait and see

Leah

A very sad but great start to a good story....you need to work on grammar and spelling. I'll give you the name of someone who is a good friend here at the club, AND she doesn't live too far from you...lol
Laz

Thank you ive uploaded it so people can tell me things like this as im 14 I'm just starting my writing, and i haven't really thought about writing before.

Thank you for reading my book.

Leah

Write more but please read it over before you upload it. There are some spelling and grammar errors./joeparente

I'm actually 14 years old i think i have done good for my first ever book.
Although i haven't finished yet i am working on it. at the moment I'm on chapter 5 were as your only reading up to chapter 3 :D love yahs