BookRix

Perhaps your best to date, buddy. Succinct. Beautiful images. Terrific all the way around.

Only 64 years young....no hurry. I tried to change it, but doesn't want to co-operate. 44 is not bad....lol

Laz I have to admit you have a way with words. I am into so many different genre of books these days but this short essay was very inspiring to me. Oh and by the way you told me last night you were 67 but your profile says 44 you might want to change that. Thanks for your help.

Thanks Again
Angela

Lovely poetic romance of longing and yearning. Of waiting for one's true love to appear. Easily relatable to many people. As most of us have probably felt this way. Beautiful journey.

I REALLY ENJOYED THIS STORY.YOUR FRIEND SYLVIA

Beautifully written .I am already in love with your book...Mari

Thanks Paula, Isn't that aa beautiful painting, that I used for the cover? I don't know who the artist is.

I realize this is not a child's story but one for the child's charity...very sensual, very lovely - another tale from the poet's side of your heart....Paula

Thanks Val,
True, not a book to be read as a bedtime story (yet it depends on who you read it to)...but it is a book for the children's benefit charity.
Laz

Lovely short piece. You have relayed the emotions beautifully. Thanks for the read :)