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The story is quite nice, there were a few typos and the last part repeated. bu other than that it was amazing. keep on updating it ;)

This story made me think beyond what was written. How much would the law of humanity - the modern, civil maintenance of strivable governance - falter under poverty or Armageddon conditions? Better yet - if the world was left in the mere hands of children...how would society survive?

In many cases, there are regions in the world that do live like this. I think you do excellent in forming a rhetorical perspective - which gives reason for the reader to contemplate. I especially enjoyed the allusion of Beauty and the Beast. Great comparison.

Overall, a recommendable and excellent read. 8)