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I think that this was a very creative way to catch the attention of others. Many times, people will chose to read a poem or some sort of poetry over a written story because it holds their attention in a better way. I think that is what you did in this poem. You grabbed the attention of readers of all ages. As a smoker myself, I can honestly say that you have me thinking. Very good work.

LaJune,

This poem is straightforward and very much needed. I believe the average person does not really know how many chemicals are in tobacco. And not to mention the things that teens and young adults are trying nowadays is not cool, but will lead to their demise.

Excellent presentation and writing!

Thanks a lot Lizzy for your time and your wise suggestion.

LaJune Marie

but i feel like they need to be doing more to keep kids from tampering with it. perhaps they should make them watch "Intervention" once a week. that'll scare them a little.