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I like it :)
I feel so sorry for her though :(

I like it so far but with some revision and editing it would be really amazing ♥

ok i see where you are going with this keep it up

It was a good idea, but the story got lost. I'm sure if you took the time to revise it, it would be amazing.

Thx:D

I voted for your book, because the story was good. It was well thought out, and well written.

The two things, if you want people to vote for your book, you might consider putting a link to your book in the request for votes. That way it is less work to find and read your book.

The other thing, the background, and the red type together made the book hard to read, and hard on the eyes.

You should change one or the other to make it easier to read.

Keep up the good work, and I hope you get lots more votes.

Thx for the feedback :)

Review - This was a quick and simple story that spoke of a very sad subject. You did a good job of showing the vicious cycle of of how the victims are pulled in again and again. Your victim finds the strength to pull away, to start the healing process. I liked how you put a goodly amount of her thought process of missing her parents and feeling alone. It needs a bit more of a turning point, more of thought process of why she would break away. Because believe it or not, these victims have the ability to reason out, and make excuses for why this type of behavior is happening to them. Many times they have no self confidence and intense fear of the bully. And they stay in the relationship because of that.
You did a nice job on the dialogue as well. Little more editing, you have a few hiccups in spelling and structure. Otherwise good job. Robynn

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plz add more :) asap !!!!