Tough Day's

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Tough Day's
I am writing bit by almost every day so check if you want to see more

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lazarus67

Ps I voted because of your story. Keep working at it. I know it's not so easy.

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lazarus67

I just read most of your story. Its good. but you need to work on spelling and grammar. Such as the difference between to and too, of and off, write and right, heard and herd...etc. Also, don't run your sentences together. Use periods and commas where needed.
Besides that you got a great story. I will finish it soon.

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