BookRix

UPDATE!!! THIS BOOK IS AMAZING!!! XD

I really loved it, I sort of wished that the ass kicking and name taking would have continued in the mirror room, but I'd be fine with just more story. I enjoyed it!
Write more ;)

This was really cool and I want more.

I like it. I already want Effie and James to become an item. :) Definitely continue this. The one thing I'd point out is that you start in the past tense and switch to the present. It caused a slight hiccup in my reading, but that's an easy fix. Overall, I'd love to read more.

I won't repeat what those before me commented...oh what the heck...yes, write more...lol

I think you have some real promise here. you are definitely a talent in writing with imagination. I am looking forward to reading the rest./joeparente you have a vote from me.

Read: "FAILING WELL"

Your voice and narrative style are unique; exceptional. I enjoyed EVERYTHING except the green flames at the tops of the pages that made reading somewhat difficult :)

I voted for you :)
you just need to finish now :)

It is a great read so far, I love that its about witches and a different take on that genre. It was very interesting keep it up! :)

-SelishXIII

This story was quite interesting, cant wait to read more