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I could tell right from the start that this was going to be totally epic! Possession,demons, fallen, legions and minions of evil - and the people who fight against them! I really like when all the old bible stories are brought into the present - and I think this is a very unique idea - bringing the young gamers into the underworld to fight the demons with their mad MMO video game skills! I'm only on page 47, but I'm already drawn in to this world - I can't wait to find out what the secret is that the demon will reveal.

Great story!

Also, I saw a few mistakes - so you might want to grab an editor and have her/him do a quick proofreading. It'll be a HUGE help with your sales and reviews.
For example:
Page 11 - "get outside to meet herpartner" - there is a space missing here.
Page 15 - "Stacy followed her fried through the partially" - this should be "friend".
Page 20 - "Jenny assumed her prey were had unwittingly" - remove "were".
Page 23 - "Why else would expose yourself in public" - needs to be "would you".
- "You need to Leave, now" - The word "leave" shouldn't be capitalized.
- parted as a Asian woman" - should be "an Asian"
Also, half of your dialogue isn't punctuated correctly - you are missing commas and often use periods instead. Take a look at the link I attached.