Lost In A World That Is Not Mine 1

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Lost In A World That Is Not Mine 1

Hope to love the book! I been thinking about writing it, and than I nearly lost my mind. SOOOOO hope you love the book and heart it!



Kiba is 19 year old human, but when he meets the young 15 year old girl, Luna. He falls in love with her, but when dragons threat the small town Kiba must choose who to pick , his own, or Luna's own.

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andrewn02

Hi,
I have an offer related to writing story and I'd like to talk about it.
If you are interested, you can reach me on insta: ods.apa or message me at leonandre880 (at) g m a i l (dot) com
Thanks.

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bookzilla

because the blurb sounds interesting, but there are too many spelling mistakes and it's too distracting and hard to read.

for example, in the first paragraph:
"chimmy" = "chimney"
"Sighning" = "sighing" wrong more than once
"stronge" = "strong"
"childeren" = "children"
"rooten" = "rotten"
"singled" = "signaled"

so maybe you should put your story into microsoft word or something to use the spell check.

let me know after you fix it up so i can read it!

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