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:) That is all I can say :)

A lot of work went into this writing. You did well moving the story along. You did well with your characters. You are just beginning like we all did so you will need to do some work on grammar, sentence structure, spelling and Point of View. Be happy to answer any questions. Robynn

its great! ur so talented little miss! if you could just wright more so u wouldnt leave people hanging it would be auesome! great job!

really good write more