Perhaps I am being unfair as I have only read the prologue, but the Earth's core and a good deal of the Earth is very hot, molten hot. From a Sci-Fi point of view, it would be better to make them live underground but not that deep. Less explaining away to do.
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Sorry I cannot read more as my sight is poor with the print being aso small. Not your fauklt. I uloaded one of mine which I deliberately set in a larger font. Camer out the size all the others do. Evelyn
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Sorry I cannot read more as my sight is poor with the print being aso small. Not your fauklt. I uloaded one of mine which I deliberately set in a larger font. Camer out the size all the others do. Evelyn
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KENNEDY!!! hahahah! It's since!!! :P LOL
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Very good...great start. I hope you continue. Apart from a few minor errors, you are well on your way to a fine and interesting tale.
Are you sure you are only 15...lol?
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