BookRix

I love this book. It has one of the more original plot lines i've seen on this website. Please Please Please right a sequel or continue this book!!! I really want to know what happens next!

I just read the first edition and was very pleased with the story line and the way the writer put it all together. Thank you for an enjoyable afternoon.
liteyourfire7

good but it is a bit short

i like it. when does the next one come out

I love this story it is great and the charcters are wonderful, you have a very good imagnation and are a wonderful writer. I look forward to more:3

I really like it so far! Very entertaining :) but I'm confused on the title. On the cover it says "Dawn of A New Life" and on the side in the description area on this page it says "Dawn of A Second Life". Which is it? Ha not trying to sound nit-picky, but I just wanna make sure I get the title right.

But some editing is needed.. I stopped counting after page 7, when I discovered the third error. In some places, words are missing, and then there was a spot where the language was muddled.. Kathrayne used entirely too many words and the ones she used were not used in an order that made sense. Overall, the story was quite good, but the errors detracted from the overall reading experience.

But some editing is needed.. I stopped counting after page 7, when I discovered the third error. In some places, words are missing, and then there was a spot where the language was muddled.. Kathrayne used entirely too many words and the ones she used were not used in an order that made sense. Overall, the story was quite good, but the errors detracted from the overall reading experience.

I liked the story..

i have only red the first 2 chapters because i got 2 get up in the morning & it is getting late but this is starting to be the best book i have read in a long time i have to reed more tomorrow after work i hope it gets even better :)