Yeah, this was one of those beginner's stories. I wrote this one many years ago, it was when I first started developing characters.
Although it is sorry to say that I may never finish this story. There was a bit of a problem. I do have other completed books if I find them I will definitely type them up so people can enjoy them.
Thank you for the comment. It may definitely get me more motivated.
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As a fan of suspense and mysteries, "Shadowless," really appeals to me. The beginning captured the muddled jumbled thoughts that I would assume one would have after such serious shock.
I like your minimalist approach to Alex. Most unsubs (yes, I'm a Criminal Minds fan!) are sparse...until they're not. Good writing here.
Jumping back and forth between characters confused me. After the first jump into Alex's thoughts, I didn't... mehr anzeigen
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