An interesting concept. All you need is a bit of expansion with your characters and some editing and your engaging story could become captivating.
Good luck.
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Timothy was just an ordinary boy until one day,when the most unexplainable thing happens to him.He realizes he can absorb peoples abilities and knowledge and use them for his own purposes.It is up to him to decide how he uses them and whether there is a dark side to his powers that he doesnt yet know about.
An interesting concept. All you need is a bit of expansion with your characters and some editing and your engaging story could become captivating.
Good luck.
Thanks for the tips.I hope you liked the story :)