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I liked what was there :P Update soon,.please!
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Hmh... I think you should add a bit more. I'm still trying to decide if I'm a fan of Kayla or not, and I'm excited to read about her first day of high school.
I think you should add space between dialogue, to make it easier to read.
But all in all, I'm really interested in reading more. It's written well; good grammar and dialogue; and an interesting plot.
Tell me when u add more.
Thanks :D
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orangeblossom237
so when would you like to start
orangeblossom237
o adn i dont know if ive said so or not but i love Knockout
agarza1999
um... idk whenever works with u but just 2 warn u my internet schedule is a lil wacky
writing a little to correct it before i put it up