Too Close, So Far

Will I ever get there? Von:
Too Close, So Far
With a life lived sheltered from boys, it is not hard to figure why Kayla Washington is single. Being the good girl who doesn't get in trouble, plays sports ,and is musically talented causes rumors to circulate of her being friendly yet stuck up, of her thinking no one good enough for her to date ,and by her father's standards that is right. She has no pressing desire to have a boyfriend anyway....that is until a handsome new stranger ,or new to her anyways, comes into the picture. Kayla' s world starts to tilt into a spiral as she struggles to balance her father's wishes ,her new crush, and her best friend's relationship with him.


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Too Close, So Far
Will I ever get there?
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I liked what was there :P Update soon,.please!

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orangeblossom237

writing a little to correct it before i put it up

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agarza1999

Hmh... I think you should add a bit more. I'm still trying to decide if I'm a fan of Kayla or not, and I'm excited to read about her first day of high school.
I think you should add space between dialogue, to make it easier to read.
But all in all, I'm really interested in reading more. It's written well; good grammar and dialogue; and an interesting plot.
Tell me when u add more.
Thanks :D

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orangeblossom237

so when would you like to start

orangeblossom237

o adn i dont know if ive said so or not but i love Knockout

agarza1999

um... idk whenever works with u but just 2 warn u my internet schedule is a lil wacky

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