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Sad topic but damn realistic. I was torn between enjoying my excitement and disgust.

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Jeepers, Had me stroking like mad in no time at all

It is a good book. Very realistic. Not so rushed and the theme is brought out well.

And so she has three girls in the end and must guard them when her father is around. Interesting. I don't really know how she can trust him around them at all but, never having been in a like situation I can only guess.

You write with authority and make the whole story so believable. Well done. Now that is not to say it is perfect, it contains a lot of errors and will need careful editing before presenting it to an impatiently waiting public. Spelling is not bad but many changes in tenses and some sentence structure problems. Just signs of being in a hurry to get it all down before it escapes you. Good luck and thanks for sharing.

that was the best short story book iv'e ever read.

That was really a good ending. I hate Ally had to deal with a
the abuse to find herself.

the ending was so sweet loved the book :D

wierd but your a good writer

This is the best book i have ever read, it has a great ending and i thank Kaitlin Chenoa humphries for showing me what there is in this weird but reasoning world.