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Hi Kaitlin,

For me, every Poem has its special line(s) that says it all.
In your 'Unnerved', it was (So speak harsh world,continue your cruel rattle..)
I love original riffs!
Lee

Some good poems here, thoughtful and well expressed. I especially like Her Life, Unseen, Unheard, Untouched and The Wall. Well done.

I think poems are much like a short story. If you connect with a reader and cause them to think back and relate, you have a winner. You had several within this book I was able to connect with.
Monster in the Skin
My Wall
Unseen, Unheard, Untouched
I love you enough to let you go

Thank you for putting them up for us to enjoy. Keep up the good work. I look forward to reading more from you.
Denna

loved it very much

I liked it. Well done, your words are packed with emotion.

Good luck,

Bruce

a great read...I've voted and kept....Paula

A nice collection of poems stemming from the bottom of your heart. Your pain, sorrow and disappointment is well communicated through your verses. Exteriorizing these emotions in writing will certainly make you a stronger person. Voted.

I think your work is wonderful. Good luck.

This is a very beautiful set of poems put together the way your title states. The only criticism I have is your spelling. There are many mistakes in this work that a simple read through will take care of. Other then that you have done a wonderful job./ I will vote for you./joeparente

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