The Muse

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The Muse
Growing up in a family of monster hunters is not easy. This much Ashlynne could agree with. Having to constantly leave behind friends quickly made and teachers that she adored, Ashlynne began resenting her whole ordeal.
Before she knows it, things in her life begin to get really weird, really freaking fast. This chick can barely keep up with all of that, plus the occasional hunting trips.


Dieses Buch ist Teil der Reihe "The Reincarnate Chronicles"
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kaiteybrianne

Okay, so I just realized that people are actually looking at this book. I wanted to thank every single one of you who have given my book a chance. I also wanted to thank those of you that have added this book to your favorites. This has made me so incredibly happy. I'm sorry that I haven't updated the book in..... well years. I plan on trying to finish these books up. It will take a super, super long time, but thank you for... mehr anzeigen

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robbedbygreed

Pretty cool story. It's some neat stuff you've got here. And your writing style is good.

However, I would like to point some things out to you:

Now, the first sentence in the second paragraph of the first chapter is a bit funky. It feels out of place somehow... Maybe it's some of your word choice? I'm not quite sure why, but when you say "This is the third...etc." followed by "...will have attended...etc.", it feels strange.... mehr anzeigen

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Your book is fantastic and I cant wait to continue to read your book. :)
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