Okay, so I just realized that people are actually looking at this book. I wanted to thank every single one of you who have given my book a chance. I also wanted to thank those of you that have added this book to your favorites. This has made me so incredibly happy. I'm sorry that I haven't updated the book in..... well years. I plan on trying to finish these books up. It will take a super, super long time, but thank you for... mehr anzeigen
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Pretty cool story. It's some neat stuff you've got here. And your writing style is good.
However, I would like to point some things out to you:
Now, the first sentence in the second paragraph of the first chapter is a bit funky. It feels out of place somehow... Maybe it's some of your word choice? I'm not quite sure why, but when you say "This is the third...etc." followed by "...will have attended...etc.", it feels strange.... mehr anzeigen
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Wow! I just read the blurb and I'm already in love with the book! XD
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I'll be writing more to it soon. I'm glad you like it.
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Your book is fantastic and I cant wait to continue to read your book. :)
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