BookRix

Well written poem/story about very difficult subjects. Sad, yet penned with much thought-provoking feelings.
There is nothing I would add or subtract from this.
Laz

I cried throughout this whole book! It was great though. Beautifully written. I was in awe the whole time. This book is VERY deep though. I hope you keep writing.

Beautiful,awesome & highly emotional work done by you in each of poem.

i loved this book. it was...wow its hard 2 describe it hit me deep down.

......wow
this story, seems, so, real!
I cried and it spoke to me, like reallllyyyy spoke to me! Well done :,)

Your writing shows a range of emotions. You did a terrific job of making me feel them all.This is a sign of a good writer. Once I started reading I didn't want to stop. Wishing you good luck in the contest.

Congratulations on your well deserved place in the top ten. This is totally different from all the other entries, yet powerful in its uniqueness. You paint a complete story in prose of a girl who suffered due to circumstances beyond her control and just didn't have the support to push through the negativity. Your writing is powerful and touching. Very well done. I wish you great success. Valerie

Thank you soo much. I always love praise.

What a tragic story! So sad, and well described. Your exerpt on Serious Writers makes a lot more sense now. Good job!