Deadly Silence

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Deadly Silence
A story of life. Deep into the mind, where you experience love, anger and pain. The journey is long, the road is rough, and only death waits for you.

Stichwörter: 
life, love, death, mother, sister, friend
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lazarus67

Well written poem/story about very difficult subjects. Sad, yet penned with much thought-provoking feelings.
There is nothing I would add or subtract from this.
Laz

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alexandra64

I cried throughout this whole book! It was great though. Beautifully written. I was in awe the whole time. This book is VERY deep though. I hope you keep writing.

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tehya

i loved this book. it was...wow its hard 2 describe it hit me deep down.

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kristinlovesyou

......wow
this story, seems, so, real!
I cried and it spoke to me, like reallllyyyy spoke to me! Well done :,)

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sereni

Your writing shows a range of emotions. You did a terrific job of making me feel them all.This is a sign of a good writer. Once I started reading I didn't want to stop. Wishing you good luck in the contest.

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gooduklady

Congratulations on your well deserved place in the top ten. This is totally different from all the other entries, yet powerful in its uniqueness. You paint a complete story in prose of a girl who suffered due to circumstances beyond her control and just didn't have the support to push through the negativity. Your writing is powerful and touching. Very well done. I wish you great success. Valerie

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Gelöschter User

What a tragic story! So sad, and well described. Your exerpt on Serious Writers makes a lot more sense now. Good job!

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